The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The well-being of a society is important as the prosperity of a country is largely dependent on it. Some people argue that one good way to enhance/ improve social welfare is that people in a society have the propensity to question authority. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this suggestion, and I will present two points to support my argument. However, I also concede that in some extreme cases, these proposals might backfire and might have some negative impact on society.
First of all, many advances that fundamentally transmute a society are possible because people question authority or the establishment. For instance, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr., a famous human rights activist in the 1960s, voiced his concern and query to the authorities concerned when he saw racial inequality still rampant in his society. Similarly, Rosa Park, another renowned civil rights activist, also questioned people who were in power at that time over the discriminated law when she was asked to give up her seat. The social advances that happened later are only possible since people who are not satisfied with the status quo and questioned authority. This phenomenon is not limited in the social science sphere. It also takes place in the field of statistics. Ronald Fisher, the father of the contemporary statistics, once was suppressed by his fellows as his treatise questions the prevailing view on statistics at that time. Adamant in his belief that his theorems is right, he established another school of thought in statistics and lay the solid foundation for modern statistics. These examples show that many advances that change society or a field happen because people question authority.
Secondly, that people question authority is also a way of asking the accountability of people who are in power. It serves as a check on power, and most of the time, reforms are introduced because people question things. Take Occupy Wall Street, for instance. It is a social movement in response to the mishandling of financial crisis in 2008. People were dissatisfied with how government and the corporate bank got away with their responsibility when their malfeasance sank the economy. Since people question authority by protesing in wall streets, reforms regarding rigorous financial regulations were introduced. Similarly, people raise their questions to intelligence community when they learned that U.S. government conducted mass surveillence on U.S. citizens who have no clear link to oversea terrorism. The dismay and distrust of authority gave mounting pressure on the authorities concerned and give birth to clear guidelines that aimed to curb this misuse of power.
However, in some extreme cases, social progress might be stalled when people are steadfast in their belief and question authority. For instance, it is common in the United States that some people are adamant about not getting inoculated as they firmly believe in some conspiracy theories. The negative effect of that people questions authority on vaccination is not limited to these individuals. It can greatly influence the well-being of society as other people can be infected with diseases that can be prevented by vaccination otherwise.
In conclusion, that people question authority usually has beneficial impacts on a society because it is an impetus that drives social and scientific advances. It also serves as a check on power and lead to many reforms. However, in some extreme cases, it can have some negative impacts on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.3162921348 239% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2952.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26203208556 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83739774612 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477718360071 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 943.2 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2952903008 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0357142857 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209390958599 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617601196982 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382748037007 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123443945399 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030014602618 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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