You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Aspak Rogatiya, an Embedded Software Engineer working in an IT firm, located in Sengkang province of Singapore. I have learned from a friend that you are going to conduct a seminar on “Artificial Neural Network” in Tokyo. I am writing to request some specific information regarding the workshop, such as schedule, topics, accommodation and the total indicative cost.
Firstly, about the dates and time, what will be the workshop schedule, and when will it begin and end each day? Secondly, please notify me of the topics and the respective speakers. Are the speakers working professionals in IT or professors? I do have 7 years of experience in programming, so I would also like to know if the targeted audience is experienced programmers or absolute beginners. Finally, regarding the accommodation and the cost, will the workshop organizers arrange for the accommodation or an individual will be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost including seminar charges, accommodation and the food?
I am very much interested in your program and having aforementioned information will let me plan for it in advance.
I am looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Regards,
Aspak Rogatiya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...n Embedded Software Engineer working in an IT firm, located in Sengkang province of S...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'firms'?
Suggestion: firms
...dded Software Engineer working in an IT firm, located in Sengkang province of Singap...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...r it in advance. I am looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible. Regards,...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20297029703 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2176732639 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6580421182 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5833333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234658860488 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726826943182 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611089422388 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115902073025 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580104974935 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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