Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and Government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
An increasing number of traffic transportations and buildings is overwhelming, so some businesses are encouraged to relocate from urban areas to less crowded cities. While I believe this will bring certain advantages, I am convinced that it is likely to have many disadvantages on society.
On the one hand, if this policy is implemented, various merits will be generated to society. Firstly, it is understandable that the relocation of some businesses will reduce the unemployment rate in some rural regions, which contributes a lot to economic development and urbanization. This is because it will create more job opportunities for the local citizens; therefore they do not have to move to big cities in order to seek jobs, which can decrease the overpopulated problems of urban cities. Furthermore, the life quality of local people will be higher due to the appearance of many modern technologies and infrastructure. The second merit which should be highlighted is that traffic congestion will be less severe in urban cities. This can be explained that if they have to work in another city, they will be likely to use public transport because of the financial issue.
Apart from the merits, the relocation of companies from urban cities to rural areas may exert some demerits. The first one is that the increase of factories will worsen the environmental pollution of the countryside due to their industrial wastes released into the environment, including emission, sewage. The second demerit which should not be ignored is that this movement results in the mixed culture, which will gradually lose the cultural identity of that area. This is because many people from different cities come and work together in one workplace.
In conclusion, after analyzing the pros and cons of business relocation, I think the merits is likely to outweigh the demerits. However, the Government should consider seriously to find out the best solution to deal with this hot problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22012578616 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01433753355 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0332829538 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229531133007 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780869084927 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072910019401 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148893148665 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434250178754 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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