A while ago you lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
What suitcase and when did he/she borrow it?
Why do you need it back.
What he/she should do about it?
Hi John,
It has been a while since we talked! I am sorry for not asking about you before this. Hope all is well at your end! I am writing to you regarding my blue suitcase that you borrowed for your brother's wedding. It was an “American Tourister” brand, and had my special stickers of “GT86”. I do need it back as soon as possible, please.
The reason behind me asking you to return the suitcase is that I am taking a vacation in the near future. As you know, this is my only suitcase that I have and can fit all of my belongings and clothes at travel time. Not only that I am taking a vacation, but also I am going to visit home town and I have presents to the family that I need to carry with me.
Please don't forget to empty the bag from your clothes and belongings, I don't want to travel with your stuff with me! If possible, can you please clean it as well? Regarding the shipping method, you can send it to me in FedEx and I will happily pay for its shipping cost.
By the way, say hi to all of the family and congratulations on your brother's marriage.
Yours truthfully,
Big R.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hat I need to carry with me. Please dont forget to empty the bag from your cloth...
^^^^
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...bag from your clothes and belongings, I dont want to travel with your stuff with me!...
^^^^
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hipping cost. By the way, say hi to all of the family and congratulations on your brot...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, while, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31455399061 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45338295492 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558685446009 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5657928329 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137243342748 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569606438226 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515309186099 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634533898011 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601152845948 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.