Many people think that the most important things in life are free (i.e. they cannot be bought). Do you agree or disagree?
Without a freedom, life is nothing. Not only the human being, any living being wants and seek freedom to have their own life. Some people argue that, most important requirement in life is free. I also, totally agreed on the argument while pointing out main constrain to get desired freedom on current context.
To begin with, happiness is the ultimate goal of everyone’s life. Happiness is coming from many ways form person to person, but to gain the real happiness with the family members or his/her own, good relax mind is much more important. The mind will create or destroy the happiness. However, free life makes free mind. In addition, freedom generates new ideas and indirectly help to long-life health. Further, the main concern, which lead to civil crisis, is lack of mutual bonding among each other. Lack of free time to deal with each other is the main cause.
On the other hand, current competitive environment, everything is relied on money. Therefore, people have to earn much more targeting good sustainable economy for their children’s. To cater the burning requirement, every person is engaged in a 100m race on their own life sacrificing the freedom. For example, People doing extra hour work or part time jobs to find living cost. Even though people think, freedom cannot be bought, without having buying power; people don’t have real happiness, which originates from the free life.
Considering the above facts, free life is more important to have satisfactory life. However, target is hinder by economy crisis. Therefore, I believe that, freedom can enjoy as a true freedom only with the good sustainable economy. But as human, should balance the life with giving high priority on own free life. Nor life without having a free live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...xample, People doing extra hour work or part time jobs to find living cost. Even though p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02389078498 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46684263457 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0609446717 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0952380952 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9523809524 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25296446241 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756024206496 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782504117373 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157952171189 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414758297297 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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