Every year more and more waste and pollution are created. How are common people affected by this trend? What can individuals do to address the situation
Year on year world population is in increasing trend and to cater the demand, supply chain need to be increased. As a result, more and more waste added to the environment cause high pollution. In addition, due to the unfreezing on glaziers and ozone layer damages, earth existence is in risk.
Nowadays, pollution can be seen air, water and the soil. Improper industrializations and misuse of control bodies, more hazardous waste are released to the rivers and close environment. Therefore, high risk on drinking water pollution and no any comments on the impact level for normal people well as for animals. The impact is not only effect on current living being but also to be born babies. Besides the industrialization, due to the huge traffic on roads, urban area air pollution is increased. For example, Beigin is the most air polluted city in the world. As a result, increment in inspiration system diseases such as phnemonia is normal.
Consequently, as an individual, everybody has a responsibility to minimize the pollution effect. The phenomena is purely based on our actions. Therefore, it is high time to introduce proper processes and regulations by governors and as an individual we should conform to the rule. Further, everyone should help on waste recycle process, from your own location. For example, use waste material as fertilizer or proper use of dustbins by separating garbage according to the recycle process. On the other hand, planting trees where we can and help to reduce carbon footprint. This will highly influence to reduce the global warming.
Increment in waste cannot be controlled with the population. However, proper manage on waste, pollution can be mitigated and save the world to the future generation. As an individual, system should change giving primary responsibility on waste management.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...gh risk on drinking water pollution and no any comments on the impact level for no...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... as for animals. The impact is not only effect on current living being but also to be ...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ize the pollution effect. The phenomena is purely based on our actions. Therefore,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19594594595 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02330701679 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2280384322 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.9 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185385591449 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489164749018 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456930291591 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110234000749 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389072372585 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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