you ordered somthing online but when it dfelivered its not good

Essay topics:

you ordered somthing online but when it dfelivered its not good

I am writing to you complaint about that I have recently ordered (No. 1466729) several items through your website which was missing some items instead of received washing powder.

I ordered a bluetooth headphone, fast charging power bank and smart watch all the three are Samsung brand. However, I have received only bluetooth headphone, other two items was missing in my order. I work as a sales manager in massive company and I travel around 160 Kms per day usually. I'm having many calls from customer during my travel so that I can speak to them, if only available these products and makes me very comfortable while driving. They are very crucial for a sales person.

I would request you to replace my ordered other than my headphone as soon as possible. I'm expecting that you would be taken a prompt action against my ordered.

I am looking forward hear from you.

Yours faithfully,
Faizal.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85161290323 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44969364603 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703225806452 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0106370942 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110029830127 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422692618416 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375799493288 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074886544327 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225357668358 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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