Nowadays, salaries of sport athletes such as footballers and tennis players are 10 times higher than those of teachers. Many people think that athletes’ salaries are high because of the long time to pratice and a lot of injuries. Others think that other proffessions such as teachers, doctors, and policemen also deserve higher salaries.
What your opinion?
These days, unequal pay among different proffessions has been a heated topic in society. While some people claim that athletes deserve to recieve high salary due to their great effort in work, others are of the opinion that careers like teachers, doctors and policemen should get the high income because of their distribution. In this essay, i will dissect both sides of this issue and give my own view.
On the one hand, it is apparent that being a athlete should be a well-paid job due to some reasons. The first one is that some athletes can get more income from other sources besides their main job. For instance, some well-known football players can make money through endorsement, event participation and so on. Moreover, sportspeople have a shorter carrer comparef to other professions. To make it clear, an athlete may retire in his early 35s while a doctor can work until he is 60. Last but not least, they may suffer from serious injuries when taking part in competitions. Obviously, some athletes have to spend a huge amout of time recovering from the hurt they encounter, some become a burden for their family, therefore, high salary can partly compensate for their loss.
On the other hand, other professions had better get deserving income as of their effort in developing society and assiting others. First and foremost, teachers play a crucial part in educating and training labour resources which make a great contribution to the development of the country. Furthermore, doctors are important because they are those who save people’s lives and improve human well-being. Finally, policemen contribute to ensure the safety of people and the security of society.
All things considered, each profession definitely has its indispensable role. From my point of view, they should receive the salary appropriate to their contribution to society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e of their distribution. In this essay, i will dissect both sides of this issue a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the one hand, it is apparent that being a athlete should be a well-paid job due t...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cemen contribute to ensure the safety of people and the security of society. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14802631579 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75169733253 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6150198924 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183190366912 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518458008902 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435961342567 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997410565209 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389015340097 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e of their distribution. In this essay, i will dissect both sides of this issue a...
^
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the one hand, it is apparent that being a athlete should be a well-paid job due t...
^
Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cemen contribute to ensure the safety of people and the security of society. A...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14802631579 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75169733253 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6150198924 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183190366912 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518458008902 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435961342567 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997410565209 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389015340097 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.