Dear Sir,
My name is Shelly Cooper and I am your former student in Westley College of Engineering. I was bestowed with your teachings in final year whilst attending your lectures. Recently, I have come across a job posting through Linkedin portal for which I wish to apply by seeking your blessings. However, as per requirements I must provide a letter of reference from one of my former lecturers and hence requesting you same through this letter.
The posting I am interested is Data Analyst in Wipro consultancy where job responsibility includes to assess information for software development and debugging viruses. Initially I will be under 6 months’ probation period after which by observing my performance they might offer me for 2 year tenure programme. Before proceeding further, I need your reference letter to submit along with job application which is crucial for getting selected to interview.
In your letter please describe my academic achievements and how suitable I am for the job posted. Mentioning about excellent student award I received from you will enhance my chances to get selected. Also, please don’t forget to include your contact details like email ID and phone number for any cross verification needed.
Hoping your best wishes for my all future endeavours.
Yours Faithfully,
Shelly Cooper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'programme' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'programmes'.
Suggestion: programmes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29107981221 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89383212463 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68544600939 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1455545684 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329278048812 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114502703607 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725392788325 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186016050048 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707407579669 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.