Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Truly television is greatest invention and brought revolution in main stream media. I definitely agree with the statement as I myself witnessed how TV is only companion for many and especially to old age persons. Their loneliness is replaced by this magic box. From News to entertainment TV is their only window to outside world.
Earlier radios were main source of news,music and entertainment. However, invention of television by 19th century scientist J.L Baird changed scenario. Audio with moving pictures got attention of the whole world and infact it was almost a magic to modern world. Numerous companies fought for patent rights. With the advance of technology many more features were added to this equipment. An era which flourished with black and white screen soon faded with colourful monitors. Satellite channels soon occupied entertainment and information industry.
To certain aged people who are secluded from society, because of health problems TV is their only companion. Programmes specially designed to attract children and certain age groups gain popularity. We all know how crime,comedy and drama serials got attention of one entire generation. Sports and games channels also gained huge popularity from teenagers. As all good things comes to an end now a days internet and other social media occupied the places of television sets. Mobile phones and laptops replaced television sets. Advertisement companies also now showing their interest to place their Adds on social media rather than fitting them between two TV programmes.
Once radios were replaced by television sets and same is happening now to television industry. Nevertheless there are people who still enjoy listening music in radio, read morning newspaper while having coffee and watch night 9'O clock news while having dinner, which shows that Tv's and radios always have a place in our hearts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, nevertheless, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39864864865 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73380749746 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8124980858 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102962420673 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300075269339 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215332647111 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628587393914 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161573609528 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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