Nowadays, it is an undeniable truth that the quality of life in many colossal cities is declining and city dwellers are facing a large amount of bad issues. This following essay will discuss some major drawbacks and suggest steps for resolving them.
To begin with, the most common problem in big cities is environmental pollution. The dramatic growth of urban residents leads to increased use of private vehicles, which significantly raises traffic congestion and releases more harmful emissions into the atmosphere. These things directly cause the worsening of inhabitants’ health. Secondly, in some high density urban areas, an increasing number of citizens could not manage to find work, so that homelessness and poverty are very regular. The other often mentioned cause is intensified crime rates, leaving city dwellers feel unsafe and stress. For instance, some big cities in South America and India are not recommended for both local and foreign women to be alone outside.
There are some solutions that governments and communities could consider to address the problem. Referring back to the pollution and residents’ health, authorities should provide more public transportation to reduce personal vehicles. As a result, it will decrease traffic jams and air pollution. Another method is that cities need to enlarge existing commercial areas as long as develop new ones to maintain a workplace for all citizens. Finally, by adding more policemen and video recorders in some special places that have high probabilities of delicts, crime events might have been reduced to the acceptable level.
To summarise, it is a fact that the quality of life in metropolitan cities are decreasing, which is mainly due to overpopulation and uncontrolled commercialisation. However, if countries and governments could consider and apply some smart plans and experts’ recommendations, it is hoped that residents in large cities will have better experiences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50331125828 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04660235124 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632450331126 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3148345701 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155963802406 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484295909529 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500247883996 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10206171441 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515059406126 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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