In many countries traditional customs are being lost. Why do you think this is? What can parents and schools do to keep traditional customs alive?
In 21 century, all over the world get boost on rapid improvement in many areas. With the change, there is a negative impact on traditional customs in some countries.
Begin with, from our ancestors there is own culture and society in each and every country based on the environment and the nature. However, with the technology enhancement, people trend to use them violating good concepts, which are coming from one to one. For example, now a days, funerals are modernized and most of the traditions are missed in the events. In addition, with the busy lives, tradition customs are not only losing due to the society intention, but also fail to do it as it is due to the external influences such as money, life style and society thinking pattern.
Even though society is going to maintain by remotely, with the technology, still there is an opportunity to correct or maintain the rest of culture. For example, even we are losing the proper mechanism of greeting elders, still we doing the same with phone or via FB. Therefore, it is high time to add some modules on school curricular to uplift the discipline and traditions to continue for next generation. In addition, should starts from family level to get time to work with each other on tradition events rather engaging in digital games.
Considering the current situation, which have negative trend on traditional customs conformance, as a human we have a responsibility to keep good traditions for the next generation by updating them to modern society in such a way to adhere easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...re coming from one to one. For example, now a days, funerals are modernized and most of th...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...oming from one to one. For example, now a days, funerals are modernized and most of th...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customs'' or 'custom's'?
Suggestion: customs'; custom's
...hich have negative trend on traditional customs conformance, as a human we have a respo...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...society in such a way to adhere easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8783269962 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74929396385 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5522097146 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.636363636 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195311772229 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697900951266 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568684529428 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121418973307 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219810681537 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.