Nowadays, it is quite common that people wish to join the army irrespective of gender. The army needs men in more numbers because most of the men are physically fit, however the army also requires a few women to do the things they are specialists at. This essay will discuss the army is less dependent on females than males.
Men can accomplish various tasks at the army camp with ease and in an efficient manner, as they usually maintain exceptional fitness levels. Work or duty at the army requires lots of abilities and as they have to sustain through all sorts of the environment, where most of the men are experts in that. For instance, men in the army have to do their duty in severe and unkown locations during critical times that requires immense strength and skills to fulfill their tasks. All in all, the army is dependent on men to maintain peace and harmony across the nation.
Conversely, females at the army camp have fewer duties to do as they have some limitations that their body won't support, especially physical strength. However, the army needs a few proportions of the women to complete the duties which they can do well, such as monitoring or suspecting undisturbed locations on hills and some risk-free duties which can save men's time to focus on cruical aspects. Thus, the army recruits a small percentage of females to get the things done which involves fewer risks and provides them the chance to concentrate on challenging issues.
Women joining the army have become increasingly common in the present generation. Ultimately, women are need in the army, where men's abilities are required less.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, so, thus, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87769784173 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56638984058 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6112635685 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315531440021 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130125025477 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619183178716 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221419972305 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669235647629 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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