Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come.
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house.
Dear John,
I was over the moon when I got to know that you will be visiting Canada this year. Since this will be the first time you are coming to the country, I want to update you about the places we can go or what’s the appropriate time to get most of your trip.
According to the letter which I have received, you are planning to come to Canada in July; however, I would advise you to come in the month of September as the weather would be relatively cool instead of being scorching hot in July.
During the initial days of the fall season, Ontario province schedule flower festival in Toronto which is something that should be on top of your list since you love nature. Also, we can the City Museum as well as explore the Downtown; it would be so much fun!
Visiting all the three attractions is going to take us two days at least, so why don’t you come and stay with me at my house during your stay in Toronto. It’s been so long since we spent some quality time together and this seems like a great opportunity to revive our college memories.
Let you know about your decision so that I keep my guest room nice and clean for your stay.
Keep in touch.
Alex Barns
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'fall'.
Suggestion: fall
... in July. During the initial days of the fall season, Ontario province schedule flower festi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, well, at least, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33928571429 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13987888271 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0681808226 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204392023887 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743194655583 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064790273388 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112741644198 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611363187479 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.