A group of people think that to deal with bad times like unsatisfactory job or low income is to accept the situation. On the other hand, another group of people like to work hard so that they can come out of such situations. Although, it is essential to accept the situation we are living in, it is important to always try to improve our condition.
Some people like to complain about their hard situation and blame it to their fate and accept it. Sometimes, we humans have no control over the situation we are in. For instance, during the current pandamic created by the corona virus, we are unable to take some action dispite of our poor financial status. We are accepting the economic downturn and sticking to whatever job we have dispite the lack of personal interest or low payrate. The ability to accept and adapt to hard situation is the basis to survive through this time.
Conversely, there are some prople who belive in trying inspite how bad the situation is. For those people, complaining and blaming on the situation is not accepted. They believe that their actions can bring a positive change in their life so, they are always looking for opportunities to rise even in drastic conditions. For examples, various businesses are choosing online medium over the retail shop to reach their customers in middle of this health crisis. If the business had accepeted the situation and just waited for the virus to go away, then they would have faced lot more loss in their business.
In my opinion, we should never give up and try our best to uplift out status. There is no reasen in sticking in a job that you don't like or that pays much less that you deserve. Eventhough, it is important to understand and accept the situation you are in, it is our duty to take some actions to bring ourselves out of such situations. Panicking and getting hopeless is never going to help you in tough times. It is the hardwork, which will lift you from rubble. Thus, we should always try our best to improve the bad situations for a better life.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 61
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, look, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60989010989 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46413104247 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0542372466 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3157894737 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265111294783 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082698370801 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064449971546 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162907273455 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488471200271 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.