Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that nowadays most of the people prefer online shopping and its' demand is increasing. While i accept that buying online has their own pros and cons.
There are many advantages of buying online.First major advantage is that one can save a lot of time by shopping online rather that going to a physical store. One do not require to stand in long queue in case of online shopping. There are wide variety of things available on internet.One more advantage of buying online is you can get access to wide number of brands in different categories. For example, from my personal experience once i went to book a railway ticket on the railway station, there i saw long queue was waiting. When my turn came i left with no seats available. Next time i went with online mode there i got ticket in just five minutes so it saves lot of my time and i did not stand in any queue.
Though buying online have many advantages it has some disadvantages too. There are many online stores which are operating illegally, so there are chances of fraud. Buying things online is disadvantage for people who prefer try and buy.For example , once i ordered two shirts for myself, i paid the amount at the time of order. But when i received the order it was not matching the product showed on website so there are chances of fraud is also there.
In conclusion, it seems to me that advantages of using online mode for shopping, such as for books, groceries and many more clearly outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58582089552 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5265084837 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3091602786 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200069121542 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656316626317 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589456655202 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116666408829 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047868780347 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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