How important is it for individuals and countries to think about the future, rather than to focus on the present?
Tomorrow is the next day so that, it is crucial for everyone to discuss about upcoming days as well as the government should conceive about that. In this essay I shall be proven by giving argument for the why it is necessary.
To embark on, there are several reasons to support this phenomenon. First and foremost, the planning of the next day is beneficial for people to enhance their life without them future will be become blind. For a real-life example, nowadays people should invest some portion of their salaries for their ending years of life. In addition to this, nation is responsible for future causes such as, increasing pollution, bad atmosphere. As a result, the nation discovers ways of reducing it in future because it is dangerous for next generation. If both individual and the countries should not thing about, people of future will face numerous issues.
However, why it is not important to concentrate on the present. To begin with, today, the world become a global village and the competition is increasing day by day in the worldwide. To compete, people and government must think about the time coming. To illustrate, many nations spending the money on research for new inventions and they give best equipment to their countries and others to preserving this globe. Therefore, everyone preserves their upcoming future because this day are more complicated to make a bright.
In conclusion, it is clear that tomorrow has a firm impact on common people as well as administration for a comfortable life in coming time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'why'?
Suggestion: why
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
...on research for new inventions and they give best equipment to their countries and others...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99612403101 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74662933757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9657116977 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22298318356 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781982541512 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528409976979 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120157540152 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530124627755 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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