in many countries, people are moving from rural areas to urban areas what the reasons for this, and what problems can this cause
In the modern era, when industries are overshadowing agriculture, especially in developing countries, most people are migrating to metropolises in the hope of a better future. This essay is to elaborate on some reasons leading to this trend and current problems that many urban areas are facing.
To begin with, there are two main reasons for explaining the overwhelming number of people leaving their home villages to live in big cities. First of all, it is undeniable that prestigious cities provide people with a good many job opportunities and a high-quality education system, thereby compelling them to settle in such places. Indeed, modern cities are places where many companies, factories, and high-rank universities are located. For that reason, young people come there to develop their career paths. Secondly, due to the fact that global warming and natural disasters are more and more serious today, agriculture in pastoral areas are affected negatively. When crops are destroyed by floods or drought, many poor farmers cannot meet their end needs and support their families so they have to move to urban areas seeking other sustainable jobs.
When there is a great influx of population in cities from provincial towns year by year, such cities have to suffer from overpopulation and other related drawbacks. First and foremost, nowadays residents in most hectic cities are obsessed with traffic congestion. This issue not only causes an increase in unproductive travel time but also makes people stress when they have to take a long time to commute. Secondly, there is a considerable problem that not everyone who moves to metropolitan areas can find permanent jobs because many people do not have adequate qualifications and specialized skills as well that most big companies require. Thus, unemployment is at an alarming rate. Moreover, once they do not have jobs and enough money to afford high-cost living, such people are easy to be propelled towards a life of crime.
In conclusion, in the perspective of individuals, emigrating to a better living environment for working or studying is beneficial to them. However, there are some urgent problems that need solving by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'towns'' or 'town's'?
Suggestion: towns'; town's
...of population in cities from provincial towns year by year, such cities have to suffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26704545455 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87079170085 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605113636364 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4508449359 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273276413731 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759946436215 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834334872903 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155154734135 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729847067777 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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