Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications Do you agree or disagree social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in their jobs

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Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in their jobs?

Nowadays, it is becoming more common for employers to prioritize hiring those who not only have essential qualifications but also possess sufficient people skills since they evaluate equally the importance of both ones. From my point of view, I totally agree that social skills play the same significant role as academic credentials in people’s career paths.
To commence with, it is undeniable that applicants having excellent teamwork skills apart from good domain knowledge are likely to be more highly appreciated than those who are only good at certain expertise. In fact, any corporation also includes a variety kind of members with different characters, backgrounds, and mindsets, resulting in inevitable disagreements. Therefore, if employees know how to collaborate effectively with people in the team, cherish their difference, and value contradicting opinions in order to obtain common goals together, they definitely gain the love and trust of their co-workers and stand a higher chance of climbing the career ladder. In contrast, those who lack such critical skills may suffer from isolation or miscommunication and trigger conflict among workers, hindering the overall working process.
Furthermore, another point worth mentioning is that employees who are socially adept may have an advantage in occupations that require frequent interaction with customers. For instance, the ability to sell products or services is of paramount significance in any business, and this requires strong communication skills and the ability to catch up and understand customers' psychology. Therefore, those who possess such essential skills not only can accomplish their task of increasing sales for the company but also build rapport with clients and thus contribute to the businesses’ long-term growth. For another reason, for those who want to broaden their career path in coaching or consulting fields, in addition to excelling in specialized knowledge, the ability to present and deliver value to others as well as empathy to customers is extremely important with respect to a successful career.
In conclusion, I believe that both social skills and formal qualifications have the same strong correlation with career success as they can not only help a person integrate but also facilitate their working process.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, kind of, as well as, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60227272727 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02831314874 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3065968798 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.272727273 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6363636364 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282502644552 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957585651703 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529442221926 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170063294067 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346837623258 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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