Some people regard the video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
In recent year, the video game is most popular form of entertainment. Hower, some people think that the video game is safe pleasure and helpful education tool. In my opinion, I think that the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits because they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
On the one hand, the video games can be entertaining and education. After working or study, they can relax and release their stress. Players could feel exciting to be a heroic character or a professional athlete, without having the risk of being injured or hurt. Moreover, from an educational perspective, the video games encourage their imaginability and creativity, players will easily study languages, study chemistry, study history, etc.
However, the video games affect seriously the health of player. Players who play video games have the tendency to consume light snacks and do less exercise. Consequently, they have a risk of getting obesity and spine problem such as arthritis, back ache, herniated disc, etc. Besides, players spend many hours trying to progress even through the level of games or to get a higher score than their friends. After that, they can reduce the communicational skills.
In my opinion, I believe that the drawbacks of the video games outweigh the benefits because have affected the health of the players in the long run.In conclusion, due to the harmful effect of the health of players, I think that players should cut down their time to play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06147540984 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64482109185 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0519049527 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402093430134 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149743012953 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111914587117 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257481428614 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104358417923 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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