You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you on your birthday
write a letter inviting your friend.
tell your friend about your birthday
how much the visit would mean to you
suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit
Hello Korey,
It's been a long time. We haven't met. Let's grab this opportunity to meet up on my birthday this time. I wanted to invite you for my birthday on 3 rd October.
I am also going to ask Trisha and Natasha. Let's celebrate a birthday bash this time. Full on music, food, games, and of course, dance.
I don't want any excuses this time. You didn't make it last year because of your illness, completely understandable. But not this time. Take care of yourself.
We missed you a lot on my last birthday. The second reason is I am getting married. So I am excited to meet you to my fiance.
You don't need to worry about your stay. I will manage everything for you. I will pick you up at the airport, and you are going to stay at my house.
We are going to do lots of shopping for my birthday.
See you soon.
Harsha
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Comments
I don't know why this white…
I don't know why this white space is coming frequently when I copy and paste my essay. I did put an apostrophe marks for don't, haven't, etc but still showing as a mistake. could you please suggest me how to copy and paste properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Korey, Its been a long time. We havent met. Let...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...o Korey, Its been a long time. We havent met. Lets grab this opportunity to meet...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... Its been a long time. We havent met. Lets grab this opportunity to meet up on my ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...m also going to ask Trisha and Natasha. Lets celebrate a birthday bash this time. Fu...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c, food, games, and of course, dance. I dont want any excuses this time. You d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., and of course, dance. I dont want any excuses this time. You didnt m...
^^^^
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... I dont want any excuses this time. You didnt make it last year because of your illne...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I am excited to meet you to my fiance. You dont need to worry about your stay. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eet you to my fiance. You dont need to worry about your stay. I will m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22012578616 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35468875971 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 16.3608247423 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.5478767331 44.8134815571 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 35.3157894737 76.5299724578 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.36842105263 16.8248392259 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.68421052632 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222610140322 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682914348019 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801172702607 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108370991439 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765776160517 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.6 8.37731958763 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.74 70.7449484536 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 7.45979381443 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.12 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 8.62886597938 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 8.54432989691 61% => OK
text_standard: 3.0 8.15463917526 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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