Essay topics: TPO45
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the growing concern of our children's future, no one can deny the role of their own parents. In this regard, some people are inclined to this opinion that today juveniles are independent of their parents in making their own decision compare to the past. On the other hand, others hold the opposite side and think that there is no difference between nowadays and the past. Although both sides have their own positions, personally, I believe that the first group carries more weight. In the following part, I will explain my reasons to justify my viewpoint.
first of all, thanks to the easy access to the internet each individual is now able to access a lot of information. In other words, using search engines like Google all people even kids can find all information that they need. For example, in the past it was very hard to find any information about one specific field or job opportunities, but, today people can easily access job opportunities even in foreign countries by searching on the internet. Therefore, I think that the internet is a good and reliable source of information and provides a place for youth to find information about their field of interest and even their favorite job opportunities. then, nowadays our children are able to access all information they need to make a good decision without consulting with their parents.
In addition, nowadays our education system is improved compared to the past. To be more specific, today our students learn many things in schools. this is why I think that our children gain more knowledge these days and consequently they are able to make their own decision alone with their own knowledge. In the past, some children were not able to go to schools and they were educated by their parents. Thus, they were dependent on their own parents and then they consult for any decision for their life with their parents. that is why I believe that nowadays our children are able to make their own decisions.
In summary, due to the above mentioned reasons, I believe that our children can make decisions for their lives compared to the past because their lives have changed during this time and it leads them to better access to the information and increases their knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in summary, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8590078329 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56946654147 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467362924282 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0313250166 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.470588235 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339786416973 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115517954713 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864110044293 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223924367672 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372767097235 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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