In modern scenario, unprecedented technological advancements have enthralled the present generation. Numerous individuals believe that mothers play a pivotal role in nourishment of children whereas others consider this a mutual responsibility of both the parents in all development of children. According to my perception, both, father and mother play an indispensable role in betterment of the juveniles.
Commencing the discussion, renowned educationists and intellectual psychologists declare mother as the first school of child. In essence, mother looks after the entire dietary requirements and food supplements of children. Besides, mothers teach the adolescents fundamental etiquettes as well as moral values in order to make them adaptable towards the family and society. Moreover, she makes all possible endeavours to bring up children with natural affection and discipline. Apart from this, mothers play a major part to eradicate the negative instincts from the children and also assures their prosperous future in order to preserve them from the bad society of the world.
Considering the factual information, fathers also play an indispensable role in all round development of the wards. They supply their wards with the best possible academic education. Besides, fathers provide all the essential commodities in order to fulfil the basic requirements of children. Comprehensibly, fathers are tremendously more enthusiastic to discipline the children as compared to the mothers. In addition to this, hard working and dedicated fathers teach their children the significance of perseverance and determination to overcome the obstacles of life.
To recapitulate, we can conclude that both the parents contributes the equivalent responsibilities to inculcate moral as well as aesthetic value in the children. Mother plays an essential role to maintain the serene domestic environment for the betterment of children whereas the fathers look after the academics as well as provide their essential requirements.
- Nowadays some buildings such as offices and schools have open space design instead of separate rooms Why is it so Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
- Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports Do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- With all the problems in the world today spending money on space exploration is a complete waste The money could be better spent on other causes 100
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people fro using their cars 73
- Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports Do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ent responsibilities to inculcate moral as well as aesthetic value in the children. Mother...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86779661017 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34065001837 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549152542373 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.833765688 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123885537404 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427517710668 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320894205867 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849266975952 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362105415933 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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