Tidal Power_integrated task
The reading and the lecture are both about the usage of tidal power as an alternate energy resource to many non-renewable resources. The author of the reading states that the tidal power is sustainable and safe way of generating electricity. The lecturer, however, challenges the claims made by the author. She is of the opinion that there are many drawbacsks which should be considered while talking about tidal energy.
To begin with, the author argues that it can be possible to generate four periods of energy everday with the use of both high and low tides. The article mentions that this generated electricity can be a supplement to the other sources. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that only a fraction of energy can be produced in this way since there are no much favourable locations available. Additionally, she says, while this fraction can be used to satisfy needs of few regions but it is nearly very small amount when compared to the actual electricy we need.
Secondly, the author suggests that tidal energy is environmental friendly. In the article, it is said that tidal energy is non-polluting and releases no greenhosue gases. These may be true to some extent but there are many other environmental effects caused by using tidal energy and were mentioned in the lecture. The lecturer elaborates on this by bringing up the points that tidal energy can effect wild life areas, increase salinity and disturb acqua-life, block the fish that migrates from fresh water to salt water.
Finally, the author posits that there aremany advantages of using tidal energy and can be a potential replacement to other sources. In contrast, the lecturer postion is that tidal energy can cause economical loss to many people who live on seas. He notes that the poeple who use fishing boats for earning their living can no longer navigate to river estuary to find fishes.
In conclusion, the lecture mentions the many important drawbacks of tidal energy that are failed to menyion
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and safe way of generating electricity. The lecturer, however, challenges the claim...
^^^
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...be produced in this way since there are no much favourable locations available. Ad...
^^
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... postion is that tidal energy can cause economical loss to many people who live on seas. H...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 337.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99109792285 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62528277384 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.294165316 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9411764706 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139930679829 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571419395695 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577624959834 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948121559521 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650123812751 0.0443174109184 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and safe way of generating electricity. The lecturer, however, challenges the claim...
^^^
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...be produced in this way since there are no much favourable locations available. Ad...
^^
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... postion is that tidal energy can cause economical loss to many people who live on seas. H...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 337.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99109792285 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62528277384 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.294165316 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9411764706 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139930679829 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571419395695 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577624959834 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948121559521 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650123812751 0.0443174109184 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.