Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, media is one of the most topic of universal interest in many countries. Negative situations and emergencies are more widespread on media than some good news.
Firstly, this news will lead individuals to feel panic about the society we are living in. When all the news exposed to media are negative news like crimes or natural disasters, citizens will lose the sense of security and faith in their real life. After that, they feel scared when going out, this will trigger the obstacles for developing the economy of the country. In addition, because the goverments allow to upload bad news effortlessly, newspaper pages create sensational contents to draw the reader's attention. For instance, when the warning crime or pickpocket was happened currently and pages will inform people, everyone will have methods to avoid from these problems when they have a roads or buses.
On the other hand, when negative reports are exposed, it will raise inhabitant's awareness of social problems such as theft or robbery. After that, readers can have precaution to bad circumstance, thus, avoid the possible risks in their life. In addition, when the news is informed immediately pressing issues, governments and local authorities can figure out the feasible and measures to the serious problems. Thus, the goverment offer solutions to minimize pity consequences before those obstacles become more colossal.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the reports of media concentrate on disadvantages issues instead of advantage development can bring both benefits and drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uploading'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: uploading
... addition, because the goverments allow to upload bad news effortlessly, newspaper pages ...
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Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'readers'' or 'reader's'?
Suggestion: readers'; reader's
...create sensational contents to draw the readers attention. For instance, when the warni...
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Line 2, column 696, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a road' or simply 'roads'?
Suggestion: a road; roads
...void from these problems when they have a roads or buses. On the other hand, when nega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31474103586 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74762942712 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4563935367 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962115176471 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387885130355 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443984298812 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718091872667 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388815608041 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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