Nowadays, the large cities pay their attention from different areas looking for life-changing opportunities and this trend have cause a lot of problems. This essay will discuss two major problems: pollution and home overload and I do not believe should lead goverments to encourage people to move to regional area.
On the one hand, the level of pollution is increasing sharply and cause for concern among residents of big cities. Because of high volumes of vehicle emissions, it causes the degradation and is a significant contributor to the kind of respiratory disease such as acute transaction, lung cancer, etc. Additionally, the over population in large cities is extremely putting pressure to work. The workers had to work overtime to meet employment opportunities with high salary and meet needs as well as affordability levels. It causes over work with the high suicide rate like Japan.
In my opinion, governments should not what they can to encourage city residents to move to regional areas. Firstly, it is not easy to adapt the life in the smaller town. People have suitable work and have sufficient facilities for a stable life but when they move the another town, their life will be turned upside down, looking for a new job and settling down for their family to put pressure on them. Furthermore, it will be enough labour force. After that, companies will be short of manpower and cause economic loss.
In conclusion, serve air pollution and over working are among the most serious problems facing city residents nowadays and I believe that governments should not encourage people to relocate to other areas to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06296296296 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76264768333 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4391657596 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286617761991 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849829189408 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957302443309 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176493061964 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952694419595 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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