Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the past few years, governments have not only concerned about the development of the economy but have also focused on their educational systems. The topic of university fee remains controversial, because some people feel that students should finance their own studies, while others argue that higher education should be supported by the government. I believe that university cost should be born by students.
There are several reasons why the student should take full responsibility in providing free education. If students bear the full expense annual on their own, they can understand the responsibility for their studies so as to get a high degree. When they know that these fees are being paid by their parents, they will study harder to respect their parents. Moreover, parents should pay for their children's fees is that it can reduce the burden of funding for the government. For example, from an economic point of view, if the government finance the full cost for all student in the whole country, they will not enough money to invest in other areas such as agriculture, industry or services.
On the other hand, educational spending is being supported by the government because it can help students to concentrate totally on their study without being concerned about the fees. For instance, students who are born into poor families will reduce the burden of paying financial burdon and study harder. In addition, it would also be unfair to reject an outstanding student's application who has performed well in his academic career just because he or she has no money to pay for the fees.
From my viewpoint, I am of the opinion that students should be responsible for the payment of school fees. However, the goverment sometimes has some scholarships to support and encourage students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08445945946 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7349240618 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7929479597 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27314026205 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103516013125 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517232589987 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161618145796 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711238131842 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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