Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The increasing number of vehicles and houses has created a major problems of traffic and housing in the town areas. These issues can be resolved by relocating mega companies and factories along with their workers to outskirts.However public awareness would also play a vital measure to fix these problems.
To begin with, industrilization has enormous impact in big cities from creating jobs to polluting environment. Too many employees involved in mega companies rushes to office everyday which results hefty traffic.The increasing job attraction in towns has also risen housing and accomodation scarcity. This problem could better be fixed by transferring such large industry out of cities to the remote places. For instance, if a large factory moves to the countryside, it will obviously support the economic growth and approach of transportation in the underdeveloped areas. This access to job and housing facilities for the employees would suffice and satisfactory.
On the other hand, Countryside bears lack of development activities that the company has to invest more in infrastructure rather than its production of goods and items.In addition skilled employees who are getting rich facilities in cities denies to move towards village.so it is difficult for any company or factories to directly establish in remote areas. This problem is better solved by creating public awareness about day long traffic and improper housing. People should be aware to take public transport or a bicycle to reach their office instead owing their own cars. Well managed housing and urbanization could be an another effort that public should make to reduce traffic and housing problems. Such awareness, on one hand resolve employees problems towards traffic and accomodation, on other hand support industries to sustain and retain their markets in populated places.
In conclusion, I partially agree that moving large factories aids to economic development of the countryside.However people in urban areas suffer jobless life whereas companies also lose its market.
- Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make by comparisions where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...vehicles and houses has created a major problems of traffic and housing in the town area...
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Suggestion: However
...s along with their workers to outskirts.However public awareness would also play a vita...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...lved in mega companies rushes to office everyday which results hefty traffic.The increas...
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Suggestion: The
...ce everyday which results hefty traffic.The increasing job attraction in towns has ...
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Suggestion: In
... than its production of goods and items.In addition skilled employees who are gett...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...an its production of goods and items.In addition skilled employees who are getting rich ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denies moving'.
Suggestion: denies moving
...o are getting rich facilities in cities denies to move towards village.so it is difficult for ...
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Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an effort' or 'another effort'.
Suggestion: an effort; another effort
...naged housing and urbanization could be an another effort that public should make to reduce traff...
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Suggestion: However
...economic development of the countryside.However people in urban areas suffer jobless li...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...economic development of the countryside.However people in urban areas suffer jobless li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51265822785 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0455338445 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.426092812 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364475933116 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11792714131 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362514776853 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203613793981 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527224771037 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.