Internet technology
In this day and age, it is not uncommon that a large number of people said that internet technology play a crucial role in modern lifestyle for manifold reasons. Apart from justifying some main grounds towards the phenomenon, there are several stumbling blocks which can be pronounced.
Inevitably, seen from the positive aspects, there are multiple factors associated with this trend. First and foremost, people are not need to spend a plenty of budget to travel, all cultural and historical information about any nations will appear on their smart phone’ screens under internet support. To put it another way, elderly people do not enough healthy condition leading to their opportunities to travel to overseas countries, it is reduced, thanks to internet technology they have more opportunities to explore those nations at their houses. On account of the verifiable truth that a lot of inhabitants of under-developed countries is never have opportunity to move to other countries but they still have knowledge about the European culture, hence, it is not necessary to travel, people still understand how foreigners live. In line with the previous plus, the second potential point should be mentioned. Most people around the world could be update images and databases about the remote lands or the desert islands where are rarely anyone visit there via internet. That, in turn, may not only bring to the convenient but also the financial method.
When it come to repercussions, it is generally acknowledged that looking for information about culture and humanity of any countries in the world through internet technology which is not lively and realistic, that means, people are not know their emotions when they do not describe flashback a local meal picture or an amazing architecture. Meanwhile, travel to other nations to discover local landscapes and cuisines and the resident lifestyles, which become to an important part in most of journey.
In conclusion, all the opinions mentioned above make sense, it is hard to come to an absolute conclusion. For my part, I will stand up for the internet technology because people would be gotten the benefits from this trend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...is day and age, it is not uncommon that a large number of people said that internet technology pl...
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Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...s of under-developed countries is never have opportunity to move to other countries ...
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Line 2, column 1052, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'visits'.
Suggestion: visits
... desert islands where are rarely anyone visit there via internet. That, in turn, may ...
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Line 2, column 1161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvenient but also the financial method. When it come to repercussions, it is gen...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...t also the financial method. When it come to repercussions, it is generally ackno...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their emotions when they do not describe flashback a local meal picture or an ama...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o an important part in most of journey. In conclusion, all the opinions mentione...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, still, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21367521368 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80222277778 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586894586895 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4348370856 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.769230769 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234749696908 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766488028146 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925439649426 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157208598377 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201208775766 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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