You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am Peter Potter and I agreed to rent your apartment no 214, Yemen road. I was supposed to move to that apartment this month. However, I am afraid to inform you I will not be able to move in this month due to some office work.
Your apartment is closer to my office, hence I decide to rent your apartment without a doubt. Yesterday, my boss informed me that I have to attend one conference which is really important for my work. The conference is next weekend for three days. As you can see, this conference is really important to me. I need preparation time for the conference, so I am not able to move in this month.
After coming back from the conference, I will shift into your apartment. I would highly appreciate if you could allow me to move to the apartment next month. I deeply apologize for this inconvenience.
Looking forward to your response and thank you for giving your attention to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Peter potter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n this month due to some office work. Your apartment is closer to my office, h...
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... I am not able to move in this month. After coming back from the conference, I...
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...ply apologize for this inconvenience. Looking forward to your response and tha...
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...ention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Peter potter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, really, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58285714286 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60721761145 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5092830714 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.6923076923 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302404879377 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107006934692 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103369630577 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20126428463 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894695278672 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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