In this twenties century, the earth is having negative effect on its natural resources like ocean, river, jungle environment. To be specific, Ozone layer is being meager and temperature is increasing day by day. In my view, human activities are mainly responsible for this consequences as they are being irresponsible toward the result of their task that the earth is facing. I will develop this idea in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, numbers of industries are proliferating day by day in the name of industrialization. This type of companies produce harmful gases which pollute the surroundings and really harmful to the environment. Basically, people do not try to analyze the result as they clearly know that inclination of gases like carbon dioxide is dangerous for the earth and its creatures and only focusing for the competitive market. As a result, Ozone layer is being thinner than it was before. As a consequences, it is believed that harmful rays are directly entering to the earth but the people are still not thinking about the possible way to reduce the pollution.
Secondly, the houses are being manufacturing company of garbage which can not be recycled and that is the main issue that the earth is bearing until now. The trace like plastic, rubber, glass and many more are in the dumping site of the world which are directly connected to the sea. As a result, sea creatures are dying after eating those uneatable stuff. Further, sea level is increasing rapidly day by day which is really dangerous for the human society. On the contrary, individuals are not initiating for the result that is happening because of themselves.
Finally, Climate change is the another consequences that is instigated by human activities. In specific, destruction of jungle, population growth and environmental pollution cause high temperature. Consequently, glacier and and mountains are melting and ecosystem is disturbed. Furthermore, animals are changing their habitat and seasons are not in the sequence as they were. These all drawbacks are happening because of the people who are only thinking about themselves but not about climate and its chronological relationship. There is plausible that one day everything that is in earth will destroy if this process continues and no one concentrates about this problem.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly say that people are not aware about the possible consequences that can be happened because of their activities in this earth and everything will be collapsed.
- Some people prefer to live in small town others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live 73
- Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone Others like to be with friends most of the time Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends Use specific reasons to support your answer 61
- Television advertising directed toward young children aged two to five should not be allowed 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'twenties'' or 'twenty's'?
Suggestion: twenties'; twenty's
In this twenties century, the earth is having negative e...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n activities are mainly responsible for this consequences as they are being irrespon...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
...is being thinner than it was before. As a consequences, it is believed that harmful rays are d...
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Line 5, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat is happening because of themselves. Finally, Climate change is the another c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...high temperature. Consequently, glacier and and mountains are melting and ecosystem is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, as a result, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 43.0 15.1003584229 285% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98036942783 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498783454988 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1159382014 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16001084197 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431898569302 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476652785586 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994120401252 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363213629085 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.