The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems are one of the prominent issue these days. A lot of people consider this scenario as life threatning for future generation and solve this they want everyone to act as soon as possible. among all, one of the solution which seem to be best by experts is that to rise up the fuel cost. However, I am not agree with this, increase in charges of fuel would lead to some other problem.
Price of all goods in market usually depend on total expenditure on product, and fuel cost is also a included among them. Solution which looks perfect right now, would then resulted into inflation because hike in cost of transportation of finished goods in to market. Companies would tend to charge this from customer by adding a dollar or two to previous selling price. For instance:- if a price tag of a bag is $15 dollar. this 15$ calculated after adding up everything which are raw material cost, production cost, transportation cost and profit margin. If, fuel cost goes up that final price tag would also skyrocket with equal margin. Secondly, we can not solve everything just by this other factors like deforestation, chemical wastage in waters and many more would stay in our world and can still worsen the situation.
To solve this, what we need to do is to plant plenty of trees around us. As trees can consume Carbondioxide and other gases and can release oxygen which is good for human kind. Adding into it, governments around world need to regulate the consumption of chemicals in factories and need to regulate them to throw their wastage in water. Last but not least, we all need to opt one habit, the habit is reuse and recycle. Instead of buying plastic bags every time we go for shopping, we all need to reuse the old one which we already had. We also need to recycle the plastic can, bottle, papers etc so that big manufactures can reuse them too make new products.
In conclusion, By just raising up the cost is not a way to solve this difficulty. I believe we all need to act as soon as possible otherwise it will to little and to late to save our environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Among
...nt everyone to act as soon as possible. among all, one of the solution which seem to ...
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Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ise up the fuel cost. However, I am not agree with this, increase in charges of fuel ...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iture on product, and fuel cost is also a included among them. Solution which loo...
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Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...instance:- if a price tag of a bag is 5 dollar. this 15$ calculated after adding up ev...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 424, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...:- if a price tag of a bag is 5 dollar. this 15$ calculated after adding up everythi...
^^^^
Line 4, column 429, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$15'.
Suggestion: $15
... a price tag of a bag is 5 dollar. this 15$ calculated after adding up everything w...
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Line 4, column 556, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... transportation cost and profit margin. If, fuel cost goes up that final price t...
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Line 4, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on cost and profit margin. If, fuel cost goes up that final price tag would also...
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Line 4, column 595, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... If, fuel cost goes up that final price tag would also skyrocket with equal marg...
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Line 6, column 400, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reused'.
Suggestion: reused
...all need to opt one habit, the habit is reuse and recycle. Instead of buying plastic ...
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Line 6, column 559, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we already had. We also need to recycle the plastic can, bottle, papers etc so t...
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Line 6, column 637, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to make'?
Suggestion: to make
...so that big manufactures can reuse them too make new products. In conclusion, By just...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58666666667 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55125450623 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9625826651 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5263157895 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180217059597 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058215644098 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553178557771 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118197146083 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578787676765 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Among
...nt everyone to act as soon as possible. among all, one of the solution which seem to ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ise up the fuel cost. However, I am not agree with this, increase in charges of fuel ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iture on product, and fuel cost is also a included among them. Solution which loo...
^
Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...instance:- if a price tag of a bag is 5 dollar. this 15$ calculated after adding up ev...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 424, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...:- if a price tag of a bag is 5 dollar. this 15$ calculated after adding up everythi...
^^^^
Line 4, column 429, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$15'.
Suggestion: $15
... a price tag of a bag is 5 dollar. this 15$ calculated after adding up everything w...
^^^
Line 4, column 556, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... transportation cost and profit margin. If, fuel cost goes up that final price t...
^^
Line 4, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on cost and profit margin. If, fuel cost goes up that final price tag would also...
^^
Line 4, column 595, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... If, fuel cost goes up that final price tag would also skyrocket with equal marg...
^^
Line 6, column 400, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reused'.
Suggestion: reused
...all need to opt one habit, the habit is reuse and recycle. Instead of buying plastic ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 559, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we already had. We also need to recycle the plastic can, bottle, papers etc so t...
^^
Line 6, column 637, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to make'?
Suggestion: to make
...so that big manufactures can reuse them too make new products. In conclusion, By just...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58666666667 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55125450623 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9625826651 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5263157895 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180217059597 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058215644098 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553178557771 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118197146083 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578787676765 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.