You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr Smith,
My name is Riddham Patel. I have recently been your neighbour by moving to your next door, 19 Hill Street. The purpose of this communication is to let you know about a house-warming ceremony this Sunday at 7 in the evening at my place.
I am also afraid that on the same evening, there may be some noise during the party since we will have several guests at that time. Though, I have cautiously planned to invite not more than a score of people. It is a small party that will include an authentic dinner prepared my beloved wife, Pallavi; also some local drinks and dance will be accompanied. In the end, we will have a campfire in the garden area for a while. The party may be on until 11'o clock. I will constantly make sure that the noise can be minimized at the possible level.
You are heartily invited with all of your family members, too. We would have a good chance to know each other.
My family looks forward to welcoming your family.
Yours Faithfully,
Riddham Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will have several guests at that time. Though, I have cautiously planned to invite no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46448087432 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39749388897 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4582926176 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8461538462 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272538270353 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952331658117 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911568154928 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15011431215 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374343036886 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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