Among a lot of school subjects, there is an argument about which lecture is the most important. Some people opine that History is the most significant school lesson, while others believe that Science and Technology are the most crucial school subjects. I completely agree with both views that both lectures are equally important.
History is a school subject which teaches about past occurrences, which can include invention, colonialism and independence. From these past events, there are a lot of valuable life lessons which can be applied in today's life. For instance, as an Indonesian, I was taught with the tenacity attitude of Indonesian warriors when they attempted to reach Indonesia's independence. Although taken from past experiences, this perseverance attitude is still applicable in my daily life, especially during my endeavor to reach my dream.
Meanwhile. Science and Technology are subjects which mainly teach about high technology-related things. These lessons are taught to prepare students to utilize technology effectively. For the example, as a student I was taught about how to use Microsoft Excel during Information Technology subject in my school. Several years later when I have become university student, I found that this lesson is useful in processing my thesis data using more advanced software named e-Views. This is because the Microsoft Excel lesson in the past have become my foundation in using other more advanced software in the future.
In conclusion, I agree that both History and Science and Technology subjects are equally important, because History teaches about life values from past occurrences while Science and Technology subjects prepare students to utilize technology effectively in the future.
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 56
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...esias independence. Although taken from past experiences, this perseverance attitude is still ap...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...uring my endeavor to reach my dream. Meanwhile. Science and Technology are subjects wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53358208955 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91097153726 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511194029851 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.468009336 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232026396096 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895123125368 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083422316257 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160837275784 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762546368076 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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