Many People like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this a good thing or bad thing.
In this modern world, fashion trend is increasing daily in clothes. Everyday new types of attires catch up the human’s sight to wear them. Anyway, the main reason behind this is in the human behaviour to try new things which glance up their sight and look better than others. However, I believe that this vogue should be good for the society as to be updated in the daily.
Human nature is always being passionate to try new things daily. However, recently there are many clothes which are being launch in the market and so do their buyers. Likewise, there are also some people who are not interested in wearing fashionable clothes and are contented to wear plain traditional clothes. They tend to wear clothes just to cover their bodies rather than showing off.
In one survey taken by a leading Indian magazine to cover up their cover story was about the people’s interest ratio for wearing fashionable clothes and simple plain clothes. Surprisingly, the value for fashionable clothes is higher in compare to plain one. However, after the results got out, the survey company also posted some people reviews beside those ratios.
Well, many stated that they like to wear trendy clothes just because to look virtuous than others. The same type of reviews was also given by the candidates in one interview taken by multinational firm ‘Vogue fashion’ were approximately all the candidates told the interviewee that they wear classy clothes just to be superior than others. I believe that this trend should be necessary to stay updated in this modern world.
I pen down by agreeing the statement that wearing fashionable clothes in this modish world is not a bad thing and it should also be helpful to the individual to look smarter and sassier than others in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...wear classy clothes just to be superior than others. I believe that this trend shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, however, likewise, look, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93046357616 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43454959061 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.00591162 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310465342927 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105102115132 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501632577243 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181327461073 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425569303558 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.