Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
apologise for not meeting him/her
explain why you did not contact him/her earlier
suggest a time and place to meet in the future
Hi James,
What's up?
I know you maybe angree on me for not visiting you while my trip to your city London. But I can explain.
Firstly, I am extremely sorry for breaking my promise. It was all of the sudden consequences which did't let me meet you. As I told you that I had planned to travel along with my uncle with me, since he had some official work regarding discontinuing an inactive bank account of him in City Bank of London. Well, when we arrived at Hithraw station, we immedietely rushed towards the bank without wasting any time. We had only one day since on the next day, I was having Science exam in my school. After reaching there, we came to know that their computer server was down. So we had to wait for a long time. We waited for around four hours. And the administrative work got completed, in the next few hour, our return train was due to depart. I had thought that I would meet you after the bank work had completed but unfortunately, the bank wasted all the time. So we could not meet.
Well, I just wanted to circle back with you for having some old chit-chat but I am affraid that I could not make it.
Anyways, in next month, I am visiting London once again for about a week, this time, to inquire regarding the colleges of my further studies. Yeah, you got it. I am planning for advanced study in London only!
I hope this good news would have killed all your anger. Let's meet in next month roughly around 15th November. I will directly come to your place and I will stay at your home only during my one week stay in London.
Your Bestbuddy,
Riddham
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
Hi James, Whats up? I know you maybe angree on me for ...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE_SUDDEN[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all of a sudden'?
Suggestion: all of a sudden
...y sorry for breaking my promise. It was all of the sudden consequences which didt let me meet you...
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Line 4, column 693, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hour seems to be countable; consider using: 'few hours'.
Suggestion: few hours
...trative work got completed, in the next few hour, our return train was due to depart. I ...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... news would have killed all your anger. Lets meet in next month roughly around 15th ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, may, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31879194631 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3041085619 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.067447564 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2857142857 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1904761905 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.94845360825 355% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213679510583 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656536845941 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689530769101 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136246232052 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691140238916 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.