People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get the newest fashion and latest technology. Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages?
Modernization and advancement is the law of nature. In the contemporary era, the upcoming of upgraded Technology has led to the discarding off of outdated gadgets. However, even though this practice brings about a mixed bag of both bone and bane its merits outshine demerits.
On the constructive part, society is showered with numerous blessings which can be substantiated by many supporting arguments. Chiefly, the technical development has led to the great boost in demand resulting is increased productivity: therefore, boosting employment and giving great stimulus to the growth of nation’s economy. Not only it has nourished the country's economic growth but also it has become a catalyst in increasing individual savings as with growth of disposal income by introduction affordable gadgets.
Although it has myriad positive outcomes, yet there are few detrimental effects. The major disadvantage is that this has caused dependability thus causing significant reduction in the quantum of physical labour. To vindicate everything has become capital intensive and we are becoming lethargic in nature and getting obese day by day and it has led to detrimental effect on health.
Thus to wrap up the discussion, despite some limitations attached to it," every Rose has Thorns" and we have to face challenges in order to avail its benefits. The practice of possessing latest things results in significant benefits to individuals as well as nation. Nevertheless, there is prime drawback being reduced physical work. Technology is a good servant but a bad master that we should not let it to become the rider of our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...led to detrimental effect on health. Thus to wrap up the discussion, despite some...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
... despite some limitations attached to it,' every Rose has Thorns' and we hav...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'possessing the latest'.
Suggestion: possessing the latest
... to avail its benefits. The practice of possessing latest things results in significant benefits ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39688715953 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11883178286 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63813229572 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9898081818 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860508393532 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240005191964 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230817308854 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422744726985 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177674920163 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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