Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Students have their own nature of going with the flow of teachers while teaching or raising questions for better understanding. The prompt discusses that an active student should frequently ask questions from different perspectives for better learning. I strongly agree with the prompt and provide two explanationsfor why enthusiastic students might learn more by sharing their doubts on particular topics.
First of all, in a learning environment, questions increases the alacrity of the students by breaking the monotonous and tedious situations resulting from verbose and loquacious explanations by teachers. For example, when a student ask about a certain aspect, his friend sitting nearby gets more attentive towards what he says, rather than the teacher's continous reasoning which certainly proscribe him from getting his concentration deviated. Also, students can learn about a subject from anthitetical directions which cannot be possible unless the teacher is asked about it. A student who rise questions is more interested in what his teacher has to say and indirectly distribute a positive learning vibe in his classroom. These various direct and indirect influences by asking questions results in better learning and understanding of subject.
Secondly, asking questions by a student in a class, not only increases his congenial friend attention but also encourages teacher to be more prepared in the topic so that he could give answer to his fellow learners. He becomes more prepared and cautious to various type of questions he may encounter while teaching that ultimately results to better teaching quality and glean of more information by students. Also if noone shows any doubts and interest in learning the teacher becomes more passive because he knows that his students are not going to question him if he provides less information. Further, the monotonous environment afects teachers too and are not willing to provide further elaboartion, if he does not find the enthusiasm in his students. Thus, the teacher will also be more active in a class where he encounters with various doubts from his students.
However, some may argue that showing frequent doubts and raising unnecessary questions disturb the flow of classroom and hampers the learning surrounding. But must didactism not be an interactive ones for better outcomes and comprehensive knowledge of the topic under study? In conclsion, a good connection can be created between teachers and students only when the students ask more questions and not take what they are taught passively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... glean of more information by students. Also if noone shows any doubts and interest ...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...ut must didactism not be an interactive ones for better outcomes and comprehensive k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.425 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91049394433 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5225 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8627098163 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140865712936 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567640914015 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411819628983 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104724008379 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041300769381 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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