You are going to do a computer course at your local college. Write a letter and mention:
- Why do you want to do this course? - Have you any educational background and computer skills. - Ask some questions about the course.
Dear Sir,
My name is Rahul Krishnan and I hail from Pathanamthitta. I am writing this letter to express my desire to do a course in computer animation which is offered by your college.
Computer animation is an emerging field, and your college is the first among which is offering the course. Some of my friends went to Delhi to do this course. From word of mouth, I heard that there are many job opportunities after this program. So I decided to pursue this two-year course.
I have done Master’s in computer technology and are familiar with programming languages like C++ and python, add to that I have learned photoshop online. Therefore, I believe that the course would be relatively easy.
I want to enquire more about the program and fees structure. Moreover, I would like to know whether this course is part-time or full time and when the next intake is. Please reply soon so that I can join immediately. Thanking you!
Yours faithfully,
Rahul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...now whether this course is part-time or full time and when the next intake is. Please rep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81325301205 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71285735094 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9861082732 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5833333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28379943314 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850277552716 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775797053735 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14787906496 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404737541825 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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