ln, some countries more people choose lo live alone or by lhemselves in recent years. why is this the case? ls, it a positive or negative development for the societY?
As the country develops, people have to face new challenges and opportunities. Many individuals have to leave their family, and as a result, this trend of living alone or in nuclear family units has increased. This essay intends to explore the reasons behind this phenomenon in depth. I believe it is mostly a negative development, although there are a few advantages too.
The first possible reason for this changing family structure is globalization. The situation has opened up a lot of opportunities to work abroad and far off in the same country as well. It is tough to shift the whole family to the new workplace. So this has led to the breaking of the joint family into nuclear units. When the children in such nuclear family when grew older, they will flee to live individually and to explore new avenues in their life.
The second important thing is the generation gap. The elderly want to follow the tradition; meanwhile, the youth like to adapt to the global culture. This lead to conflicts and lack of harmony among the family members. The elder doesn’t want to let go, while the youngster’s like to be a free bird. So living as an individual is the only option once left when they start to earn themselves.
This situation is both positive as well as negative, but demerits outweigh the merits. Humans, after all is a social creature. Living alone may seem good for sometimes, but this isolation can lead to depression. Life is full of ups and downs so that people may need love and care of their near and dear ones. In addition, children remained unattended in a nuclear family as both parents are working so in turn, make the children self-centred or can even go astray. Even the elderly need love and care at this age. They also finally fell in loneliness and depression. On the positive side, in nuclear unit growths are faster as they are not held up by the family ties. It is easy to maintain a nuclear family, as there will be fewer conflicts and love towards the extended family will be maintained. A family get-together is often arranged and with great enthusiasm.
To conclude, living alone can be because of many reasons mentioned above. In my opinion, the cons overpower the pros.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, thus, well, while, after all, in addition, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72609819121 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65658461068 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537467700258 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0645069136 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3461538462 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8846153846 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96153846154 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134008045605 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365713423721 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382733817251 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790861780568 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390433566888 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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