Nowadays an increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development?
Lifestyle of masses has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, joining various profession and dwelling at distinct places invite manifold pros in this modern era. Thus,majority of masses have tendency to be a part of different jobs during their lives. Here, I would like to account for merits of this phenomenon than cons.
There are multifarious advantages of this trend. First and foremost, changing career and living areas not only allow people to explore new possibilities of earning name, fame alone with money but also inculcate to deal with difficult tasks. For example, changing career could be lucrative to have a vast experience and working strategies, tips, tricks and tools. These techniques play a magnificent role to provide national and international platforms where people can glorify their names. As a result, joining various profession enables to attain and doing new things without wearing any risk in their career. Adding to it,changing career time and again is a fruitful and prime idea in order to become multi-tasking by achieving umpteen skills. Hence, career and accommodation changed masses cab be beneficial to obtain other positive outcomes.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Initially, the idea of changing both career and living criteria is terrific to get rid of stress and burden while staying in same profession for a decade. To justify, people often feel fed up during sedentary working conditions, restrictions and pressure. Besides this, making a change in occupations is a huge privilege to learn a new culture, tradition new language,rules and regulations of new state and nations. Consequently, bringing some changes in profession and lifestyle has become the need of an hour in this jet age of 21st century.
To recapitulate, the whole world has turned into a global village due to modernization. There are few benefits of staying in same jobs and areas but we cannot underestimate the importance of changing career and accommodation with time and again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31269349845 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96917422064 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8319026918 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251256928698 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652432521397 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312213551611 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133369609364 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496969120785 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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