A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday Write a letter to your friend In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at le

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions on how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear………….,

Dear Trisha,

Hope you are doing keeping well, safe and sound and accomodating well in your new job. It's has been quite a long since we met last. I'm writing this letter to thank you for your gesture to my request for taking care of my cat while I am away for a business meeting for a week.

I'm departing on the 21st of October and staying there for a week and will be back by end of the week. Also, my business meeting will be held at hotel ramada and I will be staying there for a week. you already have my contact number. However, I will be available on my office number only during my office time and details for it I'm enclosing here for your reference.

I know you're well trained for taking care of pet animals. I'd really appreciate it if you're going to take care of its vaccine which I am giving twice a day as it was suffering from some disease for the last many days. Besides this, please take care of its beverage and food supplements requirements.

I'd like to thank you for your anticipation. There is no doubt that you are going to take care of my cat as your own. Hence, I've no worries now about my cat and I can attend my conference without any fear.

Give my love to your parents,

Saumil

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y for a business meeting for a week. Im departing on the 21st of October and st...
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...uring my office time and details for it Im enclosing here for your reference. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, really, so, well, while, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23605150215 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25886478428 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583690987124 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3235420799 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312700913783 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121993663788 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937699593841 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194898649424 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550083983369 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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