Some people think that it is best for extended families to live together. Other people think that it is best for the nuclear family to live away from the extended family. Which one do you prefer?
A society comprises of many families which play a major role to develop it. A family could be a extended or a nuclear one and it is upto people's comfortability to choose a joint or a separate one. I personally prefer the extended family mainly because of two reasons, which will be explained in the below paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason why I live in joint family is, younger children are allowed to spend more time with their grandparents and cousins. This helps them to learn a lot from the experience of the old generation people and also develops many good personalities, such as sharing, caring, playing together and so on. For example, a child growing in such environment would have many people of different ages around them to play and they could get good guidance from them too.
Furthermore, the expenses could be shared among the family members who are all living under the same roof. Expenditure could be well planned if we live together, thus indeed saves money. Besides that, many quality times can be spent together which will build a strong relationship between them. They can easily plan for any vacation as they would be knowing each others schedule, for instance.
On the other hand, there is a thought that, there are many chances to develop disputes among the members of the household and it is very easy to get into a quarrel when there are too many people with different opinions live together, which will directly affect the relationship. But, I believe, that all these are completely dependant on the people's mentality and comfortability. There are many families who still maintain the perfect relationship even though there are lot of misunderstandings among them.
To sum up, to save money and to have a better future for their offsprings, people are now seen to prefer the extended family. Inspire of leaving their children in creche and leave for work, they can leave their children under the support of the grandparents, which indeed reduces expenses too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r role to develop it. A family could be a extended or a nuclear one and it is upt...
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...nd more time with their grandparents and cousins. This helps them to learn a lot ...
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... believe, that all these are completely dependant on the peoples mentality and comfortabi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92330383481 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69862658185 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551622418879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4064274887 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293757775007 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993751803862 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562792624568 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163216091489 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655637212724 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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