Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place?
Many people wonder whether spend their lives in one specific place is sufficiently adequate. Personally, I believe that moving to different places many times is more worthwhile in better ways than choose to remain in one location, since the same neighborhood to the same city.
To begin with, the primary reason for my opinion is that betting on the different is highly rewarding, despite insecurities and limitations. Those difficulties happen on account of the feeling of being dislocated or away from themselves, sustained with the fear of the inability to create identity with that place. However, in my point of view, the more cultures you know, the more you will enrich your identity. In this sense, thus, you do not need to recognize yourself in a specific place to be able to earn self-knowledge, but going beyond your comfort zone may certainly provide a higher level of self-discovery.
Furthermore, leaving your comfort zone is not just about explore diverse circumstances, but about the going further on your own walk of life and its distinct stages. A case in point is when my cousin decided, even with his wanderlust lack, to be a diplomatic. By first instance, he decided to take his university close to his family, but, right after he concluded this phase he became eager to go further and decided that, for that, traveling would be fundamental. In other words, as he always repeats to me, being a better person is to contribute to wherever you have been through and that is what makes you able to strengthening bonds and to create stronger home configurations and, consequently, be able to step in your next stage with not only stability, but greatness as well.
To sum up, I strongly feel that, in general, moving in search of another place is more mind opening, since it stimulates ours horizons to go wider. This is because of how overcoming our limitations leaving our comfort zone is rewarding and how all this journey’s knowledge makes us more prepared for the walk of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, in general, you know, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89117647059 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85098629203 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4074326626 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.583333333 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.45110844103 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192573970244 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731354241899 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849682057319 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129416124024 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101403814591 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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