Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Living in an era full of options and opportunities, however fortunate we might be, some believe it might lead to negative consequences. This essay accords with this view as I believe we tend to make unnecessary purchases and produce excess waste.
Overconsumption is one of the salient causes of land pollution in modern days; with the advancement of industrial technology, much more clothing is produced and hence companies introduce new items each day with the help of bombarding advertisements. Under the heavy influence of fast fashion, people frequent to boutiques such as Zara, H&M, and Uniqlo, for their low-priced, low-quality items that cannot last for long. The purpose of clothing no longer remains as a basic necessity for protection, but merely a short-time amusement. As a result, millions of clothes are dumped into the landfills and buried there for years without being dissolved.
Another problem with the flood of choices is food waste. While food from all around the world is supplied in supermarkets and department stores at a reasonable price, people often purchase more food than they actually need.
Instead of the staple in daily life, feasts are held frequently, and foods that are not considered enjoyable would be thrown into the bin. Take China as an example, it is an ordinary scene to have half of the gourmet left untouched at every wedding ceremony, which produces more than 100,000kg of waste alone. Ultimately, with more food goes into the gutter, not only is it detrimental to the environment but also immoral as millions of our counterparts living in famine.
To conclude, being provided with too many choices might instead have disastrous effects since people overconsume clothing and exhaust food resources. One should make his/her decision wisely and avoid such mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82881480274 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9855747555 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162768925398 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543075471597 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633995833935 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930600297882 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611917031193 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.