The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Cars are one of the most popular means of transports across the globe, especially in Great Britain where the first car was introduced on the British roads in the year 1888. There is a prediction that there might be around 29 million vehicles on British roads by the year 2000. Some are of the opinion that the public must be encouraged to use alternative means of transport and also a few international laws must be introduced to control car utilization and ownership. I strongly advocate the suggestion provided by the prompt as there are two advantages of doing so.
Firstly, stemming the total number of vehicles on the road by encouraging the inhabitants of Great Britain would help in reducing air pollution. Air pollution has reached intolerable levels in the past few years which paved way for a number of environmental issues such as global warming, climatic change, and ozone layer depletion. A recent study conducted by a research center in the USA reveals that almost 5-6% of the ozone layer in the middle latitude has already been depleted. With the rate at which the number of vehicles being driven on the British road is increasing, the ozone layer above Great Britain might deplete in the coming years. This can be prevented if the government could take measures and encourage the citizens to commute by other alternative transports available such as bus, uber pool(shared taxis), and metro.
Secondly, instigating international laws to control car ownership and use would play a key role in encouraging the residents to switch to alternative forms of transport. Imposing laws would prevent residents from purchasing extra cars unnecessarily. For instance, a family of 4 owns 3-4 cars, one for each person. This could be reduced if the government imposes stringent rules on car ownership. Furthermore, unnecessary usage of cars can also be reduced which in turn reduces the amount of traffic on the roads enabling the residents to save time which would be otherwise spent on waiting in the traffic.
Hence, imposing international laws on car ownership and utilization and also encouraging the residents to use alternative forms of transport helps in reducing pollution caused and also limits the total number of vehicles on the road which in turn prevents traffic jams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07957559682 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84299156126 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501326259947 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9751458995 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447014980407 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147434427753 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121188501871 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288574164482 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141070581778 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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