You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain the important event
apologise for the situation
suggest a new arrangement
Dear Emma,
How are you? Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter concerning our meeting in Calgary on October 23rd, and I promised you that I will arrive in the second week of the next month. Unfortunately, I am afraid something has come up here which will influence this plan to Calgary.
Last week, my boss told me that I have to attend a business meeting at his house with his family member on October 22nd. It was completely unanticipated. I am sorry, yet it means that I cannot able to visit you as we planned, and I must attend this meeting for the whole month.
I wonder to visit you at the beginning of November if it is possible for you. I can take some time off for at least two weeks. Also, my air ticket can change the date that will be no problem. Is this date available for you? Please let me know if the date is convenient for you or we can change another date which both of us can work with.
Best wishes,
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Emma, How are you? Hope you are doing well. I ...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d this meeting for the whole month. I wonder to visit you at the beginning of ...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of November if it is possible for you. I can take some time off for at least two...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, well, at least, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22527472527 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3063379071 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5716101045 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1538461538 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208231721169 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766796643881 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663898457841 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131826877078 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445105699021 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.72 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.