In many countries, there are an increasing number of provate cars. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In today’s era, better transportation has become everyone’s basic need. The number of people owning a car are increasing drastically. It has both benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there are numerous advantages of a car. Firstly, it is the quickest way of travelling from one place to another than publuc transport or bicycles, as people do not have to book for a vehicle in advance and wait for them. To illustrate, I myself used to take a public bus to my school and have experienced it takes almost double time to go there than by car. Moreover, cars are much more convenient for travelling. Having comfortable seats and other technologies help people not only to feel better and relax but also make them do anything such as reading books, listen to their favorite music and so on.
On the contrary, despite having merits of cars, there are some demerits too which cannot be ignored. Initially, more the number of cars on the road, the more air pollution would be. This is due to the fossil fuels emitted by them. As a result, it would cause some people to suffer from heart diseases, respiratory problems, and cancers. Apart from this, buying a car is expensive and cannot be afforded by everyone. This is because of some extra costs such as fuel, insurance, and many more. Furthermore, traffic problems as well as accidents also occur from more cars. For example, an article published in newspaper has shown that more than 30% accidents are the consequence of increased number of vehicles on roads.
To conclude, every development has both positive and negative outcomes. Although it is vital to have an own car, people should be aware of the downsides and restrict the usage of such vehicles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87043189369 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70618757222 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9379611933 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165998671671 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571671186928 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634341800917 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935550840992 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335847252408 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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