Technology is being developed day by day which leads to new inventions. This is a fact that cities are becoming overcrowded with time because of several reasons.
There are many reasons which encourage people to move from countryside areas to cities. Firstly, due to technical advancements cities are becoming more facilitator as city people most of the people in cities are literate and they know how to use machines. Moreover, the majority of people in villages depend on agriculture and have fewer facilities. Therefore, they start living in cities to get more facilities. Secondly, city life is more comfortable as both males and females could work and they have good employment opportunities which make their living standard high. Additionally, cities do not provide only good facilities but also enhances the horizons of knowledge as people learn how city life is and different from life in villages and towns. Most importantly, people are going towards cities because of good education facilities as everyone wants their children to get a better education to get a high salaried job.
Besides this, if people live in cities then they can get decent job offers so that the cities are crowded with people. Despite having a good life in towns or villages, people prefer living in metropolitan cities where they can live with discipline and convenience. What is more, people could get a job either in business or in customer service as cities are richer in providing jobs in the business sector than in agriculture. Apart from this, life in cities provides proximity to villages and people could easily get their durable and non- durable things without wasting their time and money.
To conclude, cities are getting more crowded because people are living there more comfortably and convenient.
- Some children find some subjects as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult to learn so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory To what extent do you agree or disagree 64
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 84
- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job Others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead Discuss both sides and give your opinion 81
- In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 87
- In some countries people are now buying fewer new things and buying more second hand things instead In your opinion what are some possible reasons for this Is this a positive or negative trend 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, apart from, as to, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1638225256 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68326681326 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525597269625 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1415861517 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220114026696 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916058232342 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901289369471 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147164722897 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540274315716 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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