In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on construction new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.Discuss both these view point and give your own opinion.
It is irrefutable fact that, public transport and trains an important play role in everyone’s life. It bas became need for all people. When masses are travel one to other places they use rails and public transport.I shall discuss my view point in upcoming paragraphs before reaching to a logical conclusion.
To commence with, in many countries folks are think that it should compulsory to spend money for repair railway line.Moreover, mostly trains are entre in any cities then trains are slow because cities rail lines are not superior as well as those traveler are travel in train they cannot reach at the time on own work place.However, of trains lines are well then trains easily arrival to cities station. Furthermore, it is significant that make new railways lines for quick to come on place. For instance, trains speed is very fast other transport because people can save time but when train enter in city then trains could not maintain speed in city railway lines. So that, it is essential to spend money new railway tracks.
Next to it, several citizens are believe that the money should be spent on improving public transportation.After that, it is correct because state management do not witness on busses and bus stops, road. It should necessary to used up funds on public transport. Like as, many students are go to school by bus but they cannot reach at the time because state transportation system is not well being. Although public road is great. No any doubt that it is should spend money for improving public transports and public places.
To conclude, according to my opinion it is necessary to spend money on both side new railway lines and public transport. Because it has needed for everyone’ life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92150170648 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66619535181 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.8786939815 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426132078606 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139648260512 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896624550497 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241196228069 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780188923399 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.